I need your help.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Sheela,
Did you have a good weekend?
I had a good weekend.
I received a letter from a girl who lives in Laos.
I am a sponsor of her.
I want to send her my reply.
Please correct my composition.
I'll uproad my letter on another page because it's a little long.
Thank you so much.
Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name],
Wow! You are such an angel. I didn\'t know that you are supporting someone. Anyway, my weekend was really good and I am happy to know that you also had a wonderful weekend.
See you!
T.Sheela
Hi, Sheela,
>>Correct!Did you have a good weekend?
>>Correct!I had a good weekend.
>>Correct!I received a letter from a girl who lives in Laos.
>>Correct!I am a sponsor of her.
>>I am her sponsor.I want to send her my reply.
>>Correct!Please correct my composition.
>>Correct!I\'ll uproad my letter on another page because it\'s a little long.
>> I\'ll upload my letter to another page because it\'s a little long.Thank you so much.
>>Correct!Bye~
>>Correct!
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