I need your help.

2013-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Hi, Sheela, Did you have a good weekend? I had a good weekend. I received a letter from a girl who lives in Laos. I am a sponsor of her. I want to send her my reply. Please correct my composition. I'll uproad my letter on another page because it's a little long. Thank you so much. Bye~

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Hello Ms. [Name], Wow! You are such an angel. I didn\'t know that you are supporting someone. Anyway, my weekend was really good and I am happy to know that you also had a wonderful weekend. See you! T.Sheela Hi, Sheela, >>Correct!Did you have a good weekend? >>Correct!I had a good weekend. >>Correct!I received a letter from a girl who lives in Laos. >>Correct!I am a sponsor of her. >>I am her sponsor.I want to send her my reply. >>Correct!Please correct my composition. >>Correct!I\'ll uproad my letter on another page because it\'s a little long. >> I\'ll upload my letter to another page because it\'s a little long.Thank you so much. >>Correct!Bye~ >>Correct!

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