I nowadays do not travel often..

2018-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I play with my relatives. I meet noone but there are many people to pass by me.. God helps one who help himself.. There is an old saying... You are also my friend during my life voyage.. Thanks for reading..

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!


A happy Thursday to you! (^___^)//

Thank you for this compositions.

Many people travel not just to see beautiful places, but also to meet different kinds of people. We can discuss this in class tomorrow if you want to.

See you then!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I play with my relatives.

>>> Correct!

I meet noone but there are many people to pass by me..

>>> I met no one but I encountered many people.
God helps one who help himself..

>>> God accompanies those who are alone.
There is an old saying...
You are also my friend during my life voyage..

>>> Correct!
Thanks for reading..

>>> Correct!

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