I peeves at anything.

2019-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to ride a bicycle. I like to watch a movie at night. I like to take care of my pet mouse. I like to go to amusement park. I like to play with my computer. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
You are interested in a lot of things.
That makes you a fun person.
Take note of the suggestions below.
Thank you for your composition.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like to ride a bicycle.
>> Correct
I like to watch a movie at night.
>> Correct
I like to take care of my pet mouse.
>> Correct
I like to go to amusement park.
>> I like to go to the amusement park.
I like to play with my computer.
>> Correct

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