I played soccer with my coworker

2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. The whole army is out of step excpt Fred. 2. I'll accept no money from that cheapskate. 3. Please accept this pot of Mama's chicken soup. 4. It will cure anything except flat feet. 5. Rip could do anything except make money. 6. I had to accept their negative evaluation. 7. All the girls went to the game except Mary. 8. Howard could not accept the job. 9. execpt when there's a classic movie playing, Pete seldom watches TV. 10. I will accept your gift if you let me pay for my lunch. Today's schedule was little rough. Montly, we have a time to exercise but usually we couldn't play soccer becuase we need 22 people to play soccer. Each of officer has their own schedule or task to do. so It is difficult to gether 22 people. Of course, today we didn't have enough poeple to play soccer but we joined the game with our subordinates. I couldn't get point. we nearly lose the game, but we were lucky. I want to get score, that is the only thing I feel really bad.

강사 첨삭

[이름]!

Cheer up! The important thing is that you did your best. Don\'t be discouraged.

whenever you experience hardships or difficulties, always think positive.

I know it is really difficult but it will make you feel worse.

So. cheer up and tell yourself to do better next time.

Teacher Nina


1. The whole army is out of step excpt Fred.

>> correct ( spelling check: except ^^)
2. I\'ll accept no money from that cheapskate.

>> correct 
3. Please accept this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.

>> correct 
4. It will cure anything except flat feet.

>> correct 
5. Rip could do anything except make money.

>> correct 
6. I had to accept their negative evaluation.

>> correct 
7. All the girls went to the game except Mary.

>> correct 
8. Howard could not accept the job.

>> correct
9. execpt when there\'s a classic movie playing, Pete seldom watches TV.

>> correct
10. I will accept your gift if you let me pay for my lunch.

>> correct 


Today\'s schedule was little rough.

>> correct 

>> OR: Today\'s schedule was a bit hectic.
Montly, we have a time to exercise but usually we couldn\'t play soccer becuase we need 22 people to play soccer.

>> Mostly, we have time to exercise but we usually couldn\'t play soccer because we need twenty-two people.  

Each of officer has their own schedule or task to do.

>> correct 
so It is difficult to gether 22 people.

>> correct ( spelling check: gather ^^)
Of course, today we didn\'t have enough poeple to play soccer but we joined the game with our subordinates.

>> correct 

I couldn\'t get point.

>> I wasn\'t able to get a point.
we nearly lose the game, but we were lucky. 

>> correct 
I want to get score, that is the only thing I feel really bad.

>> I wanted to get a score, I felt really bad.

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