I played the soccer with my office friedns.

first of all, I appreciate your explanation. I was moved your teaching. and I wrote them in my note. now I start talking about my day. yesterday was better than the day before yesterday. I participated class only 2 hours because of the time scheme. the scheme was changed by sudden. and we were able to play soccer. I got a point and I enjoyed it. Q1 - In winter, it is cold and_ wet. Q2 - I couldn't really afford it, but_ I bought it. Q3 - It was a very long day and_ I was tired by the end of it. Q4 - It's an old black and white film. Q5 - It was an easy test but_ I failed. Q6 - She tried hard and_ managed to do it. Q7 - The dog looks friendly but_ he's dangerous. Q8 - I didn't like the idea but agreed to do it. Q9 - My application was late and_ they rejected it. Q10 - It cost a lot of money and_ I was very disappointed because it didn't work properly. Q11 - He's a fair but_ unpleasant man. Q12 - I was grateful for their help, but_ a bit embarrassed at having to ask to borrow the money

Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for sending this in. Your performance this week is really awesome! I enjoyed our chats. You were able to share your thoughts well. You became more confident when speaking. Just be careful with your articles,prepositions. If you have any questions, feel free to raise it in class. See you next week!Teacher Nina Here are my correctiions for you: first of all, I appreciate your explanation. >>> First of all, I appreciate your explanations. I was moved your teaching. and I wrote them in my note. >>> I was moved by your teaching, and I wrote them in my notes.now I start talking about my day. >>> Now I start talking about my day.yesterday was better than the day before yesterday. >>> Yesterday was better than the day before yesterday.I participated class only 2 hours because of the time scheme. >>> I participated in class for only two hours because of the time scheme.the scheme was changed by sudden. and we were able to play soccer. >>> The scheme was changed suddenly and we were able to play soccer.I got a point and I enjoyed it. >>> Correct! Q1 - In winter, it is cold and_ wet. >>>Correct!Q2  - I couldn\'t really afford it, but_ I bought it. >>> Correct! Q3 - It was a very long day and_ I was tired by the end of it. >>> Correct! Q4 - It\'s an old black and white film. >>> Correct! Q5 - It was an easy test but_ I failed. >>> Correct! Q6 - She tried hard and_ managed to do it. >>> Correct! Q7 - The dog looks friendly but_ he\'s dangerous. >>> Correct! Q8 - I didn\'t like the idea but agreed to do it. >>> Correct! Q9 - My application was late and_ they rejected it. >>> Correct! Q10 - It cost a lot of money and_ I was very disappointed because it didn\'t work properly. >>> Correct! Q11 - He\'s a fair but_ unpleasant man. >>> Correct! Q12 - I was grateful for their help, but_ a bit embarrassed at having to ask to borrow the money >>> Correct!