I prayed in the name of Jesus, entrusting the beginning and end of the service to the Lord. amen.

2022-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Heavenly Father, I thank God for allowing the brothers and sisters of faith to worship God together at this time. God is always with us, no matter what situation we are in. You always prepared the best for us. However, I confess that there were many times when we did not walk the path God prepared because we lacked faith. Despite the weakness of our faith, God has always protected us with unchanging love. Thank God. May God give power to the pastor who preaches the Word at this time of worship. Brothers and sisters who listen to the Word, please make it a time to meet God in the Word, feel God\'s love, and gain new strength and wisdom through that love. Because the all-knowing and omnipotent God is our Lord, I believe that even if we lack a lot, we will be able to be victorious in the world. We believe that the Lord knows the hearts and needs of each of us. We believe that you will receive this service and speak to all of us and to each of us.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Elliot. Thank you for sending your homework. I wish you all the best as you practice it tonight. I hope everything goes well. Good luck and God bless. ~Teacher Jane c\",) 


Heavenly Father, I thank God for allowing the brothers and sisters of faith to worship God together at this time. 
>> CORRECT =) 

God is always with us, no matter what situation we are in. 
>> CORRECT =) 

You always prepared the best for us. 
>> You always prepare the best for us. 

However, I confess that there were many times when we did not walk the path God prepared because we lacked faith. 
>> CORRECT =) 
OR >> However, I confess that there were many times when we did not walk the path You prepared for us because we lacked faith. 

Despite the weakness of our faith, God has always protected us with unchanging love. 
>> CORRECT =) 
OR>> Despite the weakness of our faith, You have always protected us with Your unchanging love. 

Thank God.
>> Thank you, God. 

May God give power to the pastor who preaches the Word at this time of worship. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Brothers and sisters who listen to the Word, please make it a time to meet God in the Word, feel God\'s love, and gain new strength and wisdom through that love. 
>> Brothers and sisters who listen to the Word, please make it a time to meet God through the Word, feel God\'s love, and gain new strength and wisdom through that love. 

Because the all-knowing and omnipotent God is our Lord, I believe that even if we lack a lot, we will be able to be victorious in the world. 
>> CORRECT =) 

We believe that the Lord knows the hearts and needs of each of us. 
>> CORRECT =) 

We believe that you will receive this service and speak to all of us and to each of us.
>> CORRECT =) 

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