I prefer a freezing cold winter!
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer the freezing cold season more than the scorching season.
I’m easily swear who does not like hot weather.
And hot weather is annoying to me. Because it is so sticky and humid.
But the other sides, Freezing cold winter is more and more cold ? I wearing double, twice, and third layored.
 actually summer season clothes are more diverse expressions of my style than cold clothes.

강사 첨삭
Hello, So [이름]!
I heard about the summer season in Korea, and just like you, people are complaining about how humid it is, which is really uncomfortable. So I understand why you prefer freezing cold weather. Also, you can use ‘on the other hand’ to show contrast or alternative viewpoint.
- T. Caitlyn
I prefer the freezing cold season more than the scorching season.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I prefer freezing cold weather over scorching weather.
I’m easily swear who does not like hot weather.
>> I easily sweat and I do not like hot weather.
And hot weather is annoying to me. Because it is so sticky and humid.
And hot weather is annoying to me. Because it is so sticky and humid.
>> Hot weather is annoying to me because it is so sticky and humid.
But the other sides, Freezing cold winter is more and more cold ? I wearing double, twice, and third layored.
But the other sides, Freezing cold winter is more and more cold ? I wearing double, twice, and third layored.
>> On the other hand, freezing winter is very cold. I wear multiple layers of clothing.
actually summer season clothes are more diverse expressions of my style than cold clothes.
>> Actually, summer clothes allow more diverse expression of my style than winter clothes.
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