I prefer living a in the beach rather than living in the mountains.
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer living in a beach to living in the mountains because I really love beach. Especially, I really love the ocean view because it makes me
relax and relieve stress. Additionally, I can go sea easily in summer if I live around the beach. Actuallly, I have had a dream to live near the beach.
강사 첨삭
1. I prefer living in a beach to living in the mountains because I really love beach.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'d rather be living in a beach than living in the mountains because I really love beach.
2. Especially, I really love the ocean view because it makes me relax and relieve stress.
>>Especially, I really love the ocean view because it makes me relax and it relieves my stress.
3. Additionally, I can go sea easily in summer if I live around the beach.
>>Additionally, I can go to the sea easily in summer if I live around the beach.
4. Actuallly, I have had a dream to live near the beach.
>>Actually, I have had a dream to live near the beach.
Good essay.
- T. Melody ^^
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