I prefer spending time alone.

2021-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 James

학생이 쓴 원문

Nowadays I am spending time cooking many recipes. I try cooking various food by watching Youtube videos. It\'s very fun and amazing for me to cook like that kind of food. How much amount I put the ingredient and What I put into food make the food diverse. I like my own food. It\'s very delicious and I can eat healthy food that doesn\'t have much chemical. And also it\'s very happy to give my food to my acquaintance as presents.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Juliet! Thanks for sending in your homework. Great job!
-T. James-
Nowadays I am spending time cooking many recipes.
>>> CORRECT
I try cooking various food by watching YouTube videos.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s very fun and amazing for me to cook like that kind of food.
>>> It\'s very fun and amazing for me to cook that kind of food.
How much amount I put the ingredient and What I put into food make the food diverse.
>>> CORRECT
I like my own food. It\'s very delicious and I can eat healthy food that doesn\'t have much chemical.
>>> I like my own food. It\'s very delicious and I can eat healthy food that doesn\'t have many chemicals.
And also it\'s very happy to give my food to my acquaintance as presents.
>>> CORRECT

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