I prefer to contact others through phone calls.
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer to contact others through phone calls or e-mails?
I prefer to contact others through phone calls.
I believe that It is important to give your emotional feeling to others if I want to make a good relationship with others. I think that voice is much better measure to transfer your feeling than e-mail made by text.
(** Do you want me to make a shorten sentence like I wrote today?? Or It doesn\'t matter?)
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this.
>>> correct.
I believe that It is important to give your emotional feeling to others if I want to make a good relationship with others.
I believe that It is important to give your emotional feeling to others if I want to make a good relationship with others.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I believe that it is important to give your emotions to others if you want to establish a good relationship with them.
I think that voice is much better measure to transfer your feeling than e-mail made by text.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I think that the voice conveys more emotions than just reading texts through e-mails.
(** Do you want me to make a shorten sentence like I wrote today?? Or It doesn\'t matter?)
- It doesn\'t matter Sir JY. It\'s up to you. Whatever you are more comfortable with.
- T. Beth :)
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