I prefer to eat foods at home.
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ESSAY: Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I prefer to eat foods at home.
There are some advantages of making foods at home.
First of all if I make some foods at home it is more cheaper than to eat food at restaurants.
Secondly you can spend more time with your family. It means that you have a chance to make a good relationship with your family. During the making foods you can have a fun with your daughter, sun, or wife through cooperating to make foods.
Lastly you can save your time. If you go outside to eat some foods at restaurants, you should make a reservation and to spend time to go there and to spend a time to wait foods and to spend time go back to your home. As far as my experience go outside needs more time than eating at home.
Those are the reasons why I prefer to eat foods at home.
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Good day Sir JY~! ^^ Thanks again~! ^^ I also prefer home-cooked foods~! Especially if they are cooked by my mom.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I prefer to eat foods at home.
>>> CORRECT
There are some advantages of making foods at home.
There are some advantages of making foods at home.
>>> CORRECT
First of all if I make some foods at home it is more cheaper than to eat food at restaurants.
First of all if I make some foods at home it is more cheaper than to eat food at restaurants.
>>> First of all if I make some foods at home it is more cheaper than to eat food at restaurants.
>>> >>> First of all, if I make some foods at home it is cheaper than to eat food at restaurants.
Secondly you can spend more time with your family.
Secondly you can spend more time with your family.
>>> CORRECT
It means that you have a chance to make a good relationship with your family.
>>> CORRECT
During the making foods you can have a fun with your daughter, sun, or wife through cooperating to make foods.
>>> While making foods you can have fun with your daughter, son, or wife through their cooperation.
Lastly you can save your time.
>>> Lastly, you can save your time.
If you go outside to eat some foods at restaurants, you should make a reservation and to spend time to go there and to spend a time to wait foods and to spend time go back to your home.
>>> If you go outside to eat some foods at restaurants, you should make a reservation, spend time to get there, wait for the foods and spend time to go back home.
As far as my experience go outside needs more time than eating at home.
>>> Based from my experiences going outside needs more time than eating at home.
Those are the reasons why I prefer to eat foods at home.
Those are the reasons why I prefer to eat foods at home.
>>> CORRECT
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