I prefer to have business meeting in the office.

2014-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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l prefer to have business meeting in the office. because i can concentrate to meeting more than others. when i had business meetion in coffee shop, there were so loud. so i couldn't listen to anything. and if i have business meeting in the resturant, i can't speak because i can't eat and speak same time. So i want to meet the business clinet only in office.

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Hi there! :) How are you doing? Did you have a great time during the holiday? Well, tell me more about it during our class. Thanks for sending your composition. Please have time to review the corrections I have written below. See you later! Take care! T. Nina ^^   I prefer to have business meeting in the office. because i can concentrate to meeting more than others. >>  I prefer to have a business meeting in the office because I can concentrate on it more than on any other things. when i had business meetion in coffee shop, there were so loud. >> When I had a business meeting in a coffee shop, it was so loud. >> OR: When I had a business meeting in a coffee shop, it was too noisy, so i couldn\'t listen to anything.  >> correct! (capitalization-I)and if i have business meeting in the resturant, i can\'t speak because i can\'t eat and speak same time. >>  And If I have a business meeting in the restaurant, I can\'t speak because I can\'t eat and speak at the same time. So i want to meet the business clinet only in office. >> So I want to meet a business client only in the office.

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