I prefer to have business meeting in the office.
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l prefer to have business meeting in the office. because i can concentrate to meeting more than others. when i had business meetion in coffee shop, there were so loud. so i couldn't listen to anything.
and if i have business meeting in the resturant, i can't speak because i can't eat and speak same time.
So i want to meet the business clinet only in office.
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I prefer to have business meeting in the office. because i can concentrate to meeting more than others.
>> I prefer to have a business meeting in the office because I can concentrate on it more than on any other things.
when i had business meetion in coffee shop, there were so loud.
>> When I had a business meeting in a coffee shop, it was so loud.
>> OR: When I had a business meeting in a coffee shop, it was too noisy,
so i couldn\'t listen to anything.
>> correct! (capitalization-I)and if i have business meeting in the resturant, i can\'t speak because i can\'t eat and speak same time.
>> And If I have a business meeting in the restaurant, I can\'t speak because I can\'t eat and speak at the same time. So i want to meet the business clinet only in office.
>> So I want to meet a business client only in the office.
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