I prefer to live in a small town

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

ESSAY: Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I prefer to live in a small town.

>>> I prefer living in a small town.

There are some reasons for that.

>>> I have some reason for that.

Firstly, I like fresh air.

>>>CORRECT

In the big city there are many cars because of that air is not clean.

>>> There are many cars in big cities and because of that the air is not clean.

Secondly, I would like to have a dog in my yard.

>>>CORRECT

And I would like to enjoy walking with my pet in the forest with fresh air.

>>>CORRECT

Lastly, my daughter likes small town as well because she likes play in playground and in a small town there are many places which she can play with her friend very freely.

>>> Lastly, my daughter likes small town as well because she likes playing in the playground and in a small town there are many places which she can play with her friend very freely.

>>>CORRECT

Those are the reason why I prefer to live in a small town.

>>> Those are the reasons why I prefer to live in a small town.