I prefer to live in my country where four kinds of weather is existing.
학생이 쓴 원문
What I mean was that the scene was a part of movie, startrek.
In that scene, Captain kirk's boss ordered that the weapon must be shipped in shuttle, So Captain kirk try to deliver the weapon on the shuttle, but Scotty who was weapon supervisor didn't want to board the torpedo.
I prefer to live in my country where four kinds of weather is existing.
If there is only one weather, I won't have many experience.
For example, I only have a experience with ski or wintersports, if there is only winter season.
However, there are four seasons in Korea, so I can have variety of experiences.
I can ride ice skating and play ski, of course I can swim and watersports in summer season.
Most of all, I can see four kinds of mountains and rivers with our traveling.
That's why I prefer to live in place which many kinds of wheather is existing.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You\'re enjoying making your homework and compositions. Good job!
I commend you for doing them and for expressing your opinions.
Continue to be passionate in learning new things.
See you!
~T. Nina~
What I mean was that the scene was a part of movie, startrek.
>> What I mean was that the scene was a part of the movie \"Startrek.\" In that scene, Captain kirk\'s boss ordered that the weapon must be shipped in shuttle, So Captain kirk try to deliver the weapon on the shuttle, but Scotty who was weapon supervisor didn\'t want to board the torpedo.>> In that scene, Captain Kirk\'s boss ordered that the weapon must be shipped in shuttle. So Captain Kirk tried to deliver the weapon in the shuttle, but Scotty who was the weapon supervisor didn\'t want to board the torpedo.
I prefer to live in my country where four kinds of weather is existing.
>> I prefer to live in a country where four seasons exist.
If there is only one weather, I won\'t have many experience.
>> If there is only one season, I won\'t have many experiences.
For example, I only have a experience with ski or wintersports, if there is only winter season.
>> For example, I will only experience skiing or winter sports, if there is only winter season.
However, there are four seasons in Korea, so I can have variety of experiences.
>> Correct!
I can ride ice skating and play ski, of course I can swim and watersports in summer season.
>> I can ice skate and play ski, of course, I can also swim and play water sports in summer season.
Most of all, I can see four kinds of mountains and rivers with our traveling.
>> Most of all, I can see four kinds of mountains and rivers when traveling.
That\'s why I prefer to live in place which many kinds of wheather is existing.
>> That\'s why I prefer to live in a place with many kinds of weather.
OR>> That\'s why I prefer to live in a place where many kinds of weather exist.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.