I prefer to live in various place.
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I prefer to live in various place.
If you live just one place in that case you can have only limited experience. But If you live multiple place you can get various experience. From various experience you can increase your knowledge and you can have more generous mind than a person who lives in one place.
But I don\'t like too much movements. If you have too much movements you cannot have a chance to learn specific culture for one place. And of course you don\'t have enough time to adapt for specific culture and your children also do not have a chance to make a friend.
So I think 3 movements are good for one\'s life. In this case you can get various experience and can be adapted some place as well.
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I prefer to live in various place.
>>> I prefer to live in various places.
If you live just one place in that case you can have only limited experience.
If you live just one place in that case you can have only limited experience.
>>> If you live in one place, you could only have limited experiences.
But If you live multiple place you can get various experience.
>>> But if you live in many places you can get various experiences.
From various experience you can increase your knowledge and you can have more generous mind than a person who lives in one place.
>>> From various experiences you can increase your knowledge and you can have more generous mind than a person who lives in one place.
But I don\'t like too much movements.
But I don\'t like too much movements.
>>> But I don\'t like moving many times.
If you have too much movements you cannot have a chance to learn specific culture for one place.
>>> If you move many times, you cannot have the chance to learn the specific culture of a place.
And of course you don\'t have enough time to adapt for specific culture and your children also do not have a chance to make a friend.
>>> And of course you don\'t have enough time to adapt specific culture and your children also do not have the chance to make friends.
So I think 3 movements are good for one\'s life.
So I think 3 movements are good for one\'s life.
>>> So I think, moving for three times is good for one\'s life.
In this case you can get various experience and can be adapted some place as well.
>>> In this case, you can get various experiences and can adapt to living in other places as well.
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