I prefer to speak by phone not by text.
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I prefer to speak by phone not by text.
>>Correct
I like either way which is speaking and texting.
>>Correct
>>Or
>>Either way, I like speaking and texting.
I like to play with my smart phone.
>>Correct
In old days there is no smart phone which is activated by computer.
>>In the old days, there is no smartphone that is activated by the computer.
My computer is safe though I don\'t know it throughly.
>>My computer is safe though I don\'t know how to use it thoroughly.
I don\'t like to speak alone because I am not a adolescent.
>> I don\'t like to speak alone because I am not an adolescent.
>>Or
>> I don\'t like to speak alone because I am not a teen.
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