I prefer to travel by train or plane

2019-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer to travel by train or plane rather than travel by ship. I think that traveling by train is romantic and it reminds me of my memory of youth. Taking a plane is the fastest and it is convenient. But, taking a bus has problems such as traffic and I think that traveling by ship is the most dangerous. I can\'t even swim. As you know, recently there was an accident in Budapest in Hungary. A cruise was sinking by crash and many Korean tourists died. I was shocked as I heard about the accident. That\'s because I\'ve traveled by ship, the very cruise, when I visited Budapest. Not even a year has passed since I\'ve been there. I was so sad. My husband told me that we would not take a ship when we travel. Accident can occur anytime, anywhere and by any transfortation, but I\'d like to avoid just taking a ship.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! I heard about that news, too. It\'s really sad. I agree that accidents could happen at anytime, we just have to be careful. Have a great day!~~T.Dee

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I prefer to travel by train or plane rather than travel by ship.

>>I prefer to travel by train or by plane rather than by ship.
I think that traveling by train is romantic and it reminds me of my memory of youth.

>>CORRECT!
Taking a plane is the fastest and it is convenient.

>>CORRECT!
But, taking a bus has problems such as traffic and I think that traveling by ship is the most dangerous.

>>Taking a bus has problems such as traffic and I think that traveling by ship is the most dangerous.
I can\'t even swim.

>>CORRECT!
As you know, recently there was an accident in Budapest in Hungary.

>>As you may know, recently there was an accident in Budapest, Hungary.
A cruise was sinking by crash and many Korean tourists died.

>>A cruise boat sunk after a collision and many Korean tourists died.
 I was shocked as I heard about the accident.

>>> I was shocked when I heard about the accident.
That\'s because I\'ve traveled by ship, the very cruise, when I visited Budapest.

>>CORRECT!

>>That\'s because I\'ve traveled by ship, the very cruise, when I visited Budapest.
 Not even a year has passed since I\'ve been there.

>>CORRECT!
I was so sad.

>>CORRECT!
My husband told me that we would not take a ship when we travel.

>>My husband told me that we would not take any ship anymore when we travel.
Accident can occur anytime, anywhere and by any transfortation, but I\'d like to avoid just taking a ship.

>>Accidents can occur at anytime, anywhere and in any mode of transportation, but still I\'d like to avoid taking a ship.

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