I prepered to live in a traditional house.

when I was young I want to live in the traditional house because of some of movies. The house where I could find in a movie was always fascinating, beautiful. but As I grew up, I realized that that kind of house which have swimming pool, dog house, barbeque garden ans several garage needs owner who can afford it. Our familly don't have much money so we need to satisfy with our home. But there are many advantages to live in apartment. We don't need to clear up our garden. we have a small park where we can take a rest. and there are few security guards, we don't need to worry about thief. most of all, Apartment has a good view depending on their floor. actually my home is in high level, I look down the small park and roads. I love my home.

Hello there [이름]! Oh! Yes, I also want to live in a traditional house. Traditional houses in Korea are really beautiful. I hope to see it someday. Can you please tell me in class about your dream house? I am really interested to know how it looks like. ^^ Please explain this sentence to me in class, \" and there are few security guards, we don\'t need to worry about thief.\" And this sentence too,  actually my home is in high level, I look down the small park and roads.. Thank you very much!  See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina   when I was young I want to live in the traditional house because of some of movies. >> When I was young, I wanted to live in a traditional house because of some movies I have seen. >> OR: When I was young, I wanted to live in a traditional house because of the movies I have seen,The house where I could find in a movie was always fascinating, beautiful. >> The house I saw in movies was always fascinating and beautiful.but As I grew up, I realized that that kind of house which have swimming pool, dog house, barbeque garden ans several garage needs owner who can afford it. >> Did you mean:  But as I grew up, I realized that the kind of house which has a swimming pool, dog house, barbecue garden and several parking garage needs an owner who can afford it. >> OR: But as I became more mature. I realized that the kind of house which has a swimming pool, dog house, barbecue garden and a big garage needs a person who can afford it.Our familly don\'t have much money so we need to satisfy with our home. >> Our family doesn\'t have much money, so we need to be satisfied with our home.>> OR: Our family doesn\'t have a lot of money. so we need to be contented with our home.But there are many advantages to live in apartment. >> But there are many advantages of living in an apartment. >> OR: There are a lot of advantages of living in an apartment. We don\'t need to clear up our garden. >> Did you mean: We don\'t need to clean our garden. we have a small park where we can take a rest. >> Correct and there are few security guards, we don\'t need to worry about thief. >> Did you mean: And there are many security guards, we don\'t need to worry about thieves. most of all, Apartment has a good view depending on their floor >> Most of all, an apartment has a good view outside depending on their floor. >> OR: Most of all, an apartment has a good scenery outside depending on the floor where they live.actually my home is in high level, I look down the small park and roads. >> Did you mean: Actually, my apartment is located in an elevated area so when I look down, I can see the park and the road. ( You have to be more specific^^)I love my home. >> Correct >> OR: I love living at home. >> OR: I love living in my house.