I rarely watch the reality show.

2019-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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My private life isn\'t a reality show. Sometimes it it very fun to watch the reality show when I am in sentimenal mood. Today I think going to garaoke is much better than watching the reality show. It is broadcasted from recent days. I think it is not a reality show but a fake that is made beforehand. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

My private life isn\'t a reality show.
>> CORRECT

Sometimes it it very fun to watch the reality show when I am in sentimenal mood.
>> Sometimes it is very fun to watch reality shows when I am feeling sentimental.

Today I think going to garaoke is much better than watching the reality show.
>> Today, I think going to karaoke is much better than watching reality shows.

It is broadcasted from recent days.
>> I\'ve recently seen it on TV.

I think it is not a reality show but a fake that is made beforehand.
>> I think reality shows are fake.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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