I read well your quiz.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
After I read the quiz, I felt much of things.
I wondered I have a correct answer about the quiz.
As you known, I am so busy these days.
So I always say that I am so busy.
On second thoughts, It suould seem that I just kept repeating myself like a parrot.
On this time, I looked back upon th past and the people who make a difference in my life.
Thanks for your quiz.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Thank you so much for your composition. I think you have been self reflecting lately. I know it would help us to improve our everyday performance. Take care! See you later!
-Ella-
After I read the quiz, I felt much of things.
>> After I read the quiz, I felt so many things.I wondered I have a correct answer about the quiz.
>> I wondered if I had the correct answer in the quiz.As you known, I am so busy these days.
>> As you have known I'm so busy these days.So, I always say that I am so busy.
>>CorrectOn second thoughts, It suould seem that I just kept repeating myself like a parrot.
>> On a second thought, it seems that I'm just repeating what I'm saying like a parrot.On this time, I looked back upon th past and the people who make a difference in my life.
>> This time I was able to look back in the past and the people who made a difference in my life.Thanks for your quiz.^^
>>Correct
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