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I have a few different pices of furniture in my room. First of all, on the left, you can see my wardrobe. It is painted brown. Beside the wardrobe, there is my desk and computer. Finally, to the right of that, there is a large mirro near the door. However my favorite piece of furniture is my desk. Because I bought last year. It's painted dark brown. Measuring 2 by 1 meters I usually spend my time at the desk enjoy using my computer and reading books. Overall I love my desk. My desk has changed quite a lot over the years. First, the color and the legs are different. When I was a kid, the color was stylished and legs of a desk had not creaked. But now, it is faded color and legs creaked. Another Thing that has changed is size. I remember that in the past, the desk had enough space for me to use. However now it's bery small when I use it. Overall I love my new desk.

A pleasant morning to you, Jason!

This is so cool!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I hope that you can find some time to go over the modifications that I made below.

I was truly able to visualize your room, not to mention your favorite desk.

Your writing sure is not bad.

But I do know that your writing skills can still be polished to make your remarks even better.

Keep on writing, Jason!

And of course, I also want you to read a lot of English texts.

Always smile!

_Teacher Klein

I have a few different pices of furniture in my room.

>> I have a few different pieces of furniture in my room. [just the spelling of \"pieces\"]
First of all, on the left, you can see my wardrobe.

>> Correct

OR >> First of all. at the left side of my room facing the door, you can see my wardrobe.
It is painted brown.

>> Correct

Beside the wardrobe, there is my desk and computer.

>> Correct

OR >> Beside the wardrobe is a desk where my computer sits.
Finally, to the right of that, there is a large mirro near the door.

>> Finally, to the right of that, there is a large mirror near the door. [you just missed the \"r\" in the word mirror]
However my favorite piece of furniture is my desk.

>> Correct

OR >> However, my favorite piece of furniture is my desk. [punctuation mark]
Because I bought last year.

>> This is because I bought it last year.

It\'s painted dark brown. Measuring 2 by 1 meters

>> It\'s painted dark brown and is measuring 2 by 1 meters.
I usually spend my time at the desk enjoy using my computer and reading books.

>> I usually spend most of my time on my desk. I enjoy using my computer and reading books.
Overall I love my desk.
>> Correct

OR >> Overall, I love my desk. [punctuation mark]

>> All in all, I love my desk.

My desk has changed quite a lot over the years.

>> Correct

First, the color and the legs are different.

>> Correct

OR >> First, its color and its legs are already different.

When I was a kid, the color was stylished and legs of a desk had not creaked.

>> When I was a kid, the color was still vibrant and the legs of the desk were not yet creaking.

But now, it is faded color and legs creaked.

>> But now, its color has faded and its legs are creaking.

Another Thing that has changed is size.

>> Another thing that has changes is its size.

I remember that in the past, the desk had enough space for me to use.

>> Correct

OR >> I remember is the past, it had enough space for me to occupy.

However now it\'s bery small when I use it.

>> However, now, it\'s very small for me.

Overall I love my new desk.

>> Overall, I love my new desk. [punctuation mark]