I really want to be a pilot.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn how to fly a plane. Because I like get on a plane and pilot looks very awesome.
Sometimes, I watched pilots v-log or plane control tower v-log and radio communication.
It’s looks really interesting and I want to know how to control it.
If I were only 20 years younger, I would like studied and become a pilot or a sub-pilot if not.
When I was 21 years old, I couldn\'t be a pilot and went to an academy to become a flight crew. But I couldn\'t be a flight crew because I height was to short, which is very sad.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
I think you\'re tall enough!
Anyhow, maybe you\'re destined to be a sales person and soon to be a business owner :)
I want to learn how to fly a plane.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I like get on a plane and pilot looks very awesome.
>>> Because I like flying and the pilot looks cool.
Sometimes, I watched pilots v-log or plane control tower v-log and radio communication.
>>> CORRECT!
It’s looks really interesting and I want to know how to control it.
>>> CORRECT!
If I were only 20 years younger, I would like studied and become a pilot or a sub-pilot if not.
>>> If I were only 20 years younger, I would have wanted to study and become a pilot or co-pilot.
When I was 21 years old, I couldn\'t be a pilot and went to an academy to become a flight crew.
>>> CORRECT!
But I couldn\'t be a flight crew because I height was to short, which is very sad.
>>> But I couldn\'t be a flight crew because I my height was to short, which is very sad.
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