I really want to speak English fluently.
학생이 쓴 원문
We are living in a global world. It is easy and possible for people all over the world to go to another country if they have time and money. We have a lot of chance to interact with many foreigners. I lived in China for almost 10 years and I can speak Chinese fluently, but even so, it’s an inalterable fact that English is the official language in the world. We do international businesses or run conferences with English. When we conduct our tasks in the company, it is natural to use English. Because I can speak Chinese well, so now I want to practice English speaking and writing, and invest in myself for self-improvement. I want to have a great command of 3 languages like English, Chinese and Korean.
강사 첨삭
Hi June! Thanks for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
This is a very good and well thought off composition! ^ ^ Keep it up!
-Teacher Jedah
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It is easy and possible for people all over the world to go to another country if they have time and money.
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We have a lot of chance to interact with many foreigners.
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I lived in China for almost 10 years and I can speak Chinese fluently, but even so, it’s an inalterable fact that English is the official language in the world.
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We do international businesses or run conferences with English.
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When we conduct our tasks in the company, it is natural to use English.
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Because I can speak Chinese well, so now I want to practice English speaking and writing, and invest in myself for self-improvement.
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>>Since I can already speak Chinese well, I want to invest on myself for self improvement by learning and practicing English.
I want to have a great command of 3 languages like English, Chinese and Korean.
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