I really want to take a trip to anywhere abroad in a week if possible.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could do anything in a week, I would like to take a trip to anywhere abroad.
As everyone knows, The Covid-19 virus pandemic happened in this year. Due to the pandemic, it is very hard for people all over the world to go to anywhere abroad, even some people can’t move to another area in their country. I feel really bad about this situation. I love traveling, and I get rid of stress by planning and taking trips. I really hope that the pandemic will be over soon. I want to travel to Spain, the U.S.A, Canada, South East Asian countries including the Philippines.
강사 첨삭
Hi June! Thanks for sharing your thoughts here! I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I definitely agree with you! I would really like to do the same! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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As everyone knows, The Covid-19 virus pandemic happened in this year.
As everyone knows, The Covid-19 virus pandemic happened in this year.
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Due to the pandemic, it is very hard for people all over the world to go to anywhere abroad, even some people can’t move to another area in their country.
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I feel really bad about this situation.
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I love traveling, and I get rid of stress by planning and taking trips.
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I really hope that the pandemic will be over soon.
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I want to travel to Spain, the U.S.A, Canada, South East Asian countries including the Philippines.
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