I received my christmas present!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello!! I\'m [이름]! Today, I will say my christmas present. 🎁
I needed my christmas present and my father\'s younger sister gave me present. 🎄
That(my christmas present) is The gundam!
I love assembling gundams and that is one of my hobby.
This gundam is The \'Strike Freedom Gundam RG\'.
RG is the short-cut \'Real Grade\'.
Real Grade is one of the gundam grade.
<gundam grade(size)
SD: small grade
HG: high grade
RG: real grade
MG: master grade
PG: perfect grade
Mega
Jumbo.
I think... this gundam is very very very goooooooood!
Strike Freedom gundam was very cool!
I feel great!!
Thank my father\'s younger sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thanks for sharing about the Christmas gift that you received. I\'m happy for you! I\'m also glad because you liked it much, your aunt must be also happy to see you being satisfied with the gift that she gave you. You\'re so blessed to have her as your aunt. Again, I thank you for writing this essay. See you later and keep safe!:)
~T. Annie
Hello!! I\'m [이름]!
>>Hello, I\'m [이름]!
Today, I will say my Christmas present.
>>Today, I will tell you about my Christmas present.
I needed my christmas present and my father\'s younger sister gave me present.
I needed my christmas present and my father\'s younger sister gave me present.
>>I needed a Christmas present, so My father\'s younger sister gave me one.
That(my christmas present) is The gundam!
>>The Christmas present I received was a gundam!
I love assembling gundams and that is one of my hobby.
>>I love assembling gundams because it is one of my hobbies.
This gundam is The \'Strike Freedom Gundam RG\'.
>>Correct!
RG is the short-cut \'Real Grade\'.
>>RG is a short-cut \'Real Grade\'.
Real Grade is one of the gundam grade.
>>Real Grade is one of the gundam grades.
<gundam grade(size)
>>Gundam grade different sizes:
SD: small grade
HG: high grade
RG: real grade
MG: master grade
PG: perfect grade MegaJumbo.
HG: high grade
RG: real grade
MG: master grade
PG: perfect grade MegaJumbo.
>>Correct!
I think... this gundam is very very very goooooooood!
>>I think this gundam is so good!
Strike Freedom gundam was very cool!
>>The strike Freedom gundam is very cool!
I feel great!!
>>Correct!
Thank my father\'s younger sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank my father\'s younger sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>>Thanks to my aunt!
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