I recommend ttaeok-bok-ki :)
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My favorite traditional Korean food is ttaeok-bok-ki.
Every Korean basically can eat some spicy food. Now these day ttaeok-bok-ki is spicy sauce base, but traditional ttaeok-bok-ki sauce base is soi sauce.
And in my opinion, traditional style ttaeok-bok-ki is sweet and salty very delicious.
And that\'s why I recommend ttaeok-bok-ki for foreigners.
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My favorite traditional Korean food is ttaeok-bok-ki.
>> CORRECT
Every Korean basically can eat some spicy food.
>> Most Koreans like spicy food.
Now these day ttaeok-bok-ki is spicy sauce base, but traditional ttaeok-bok-ki sauce base is soi sauce.
>> Tteokbokki has a spicy sauce base but traditionally, it\'s sauce base is soy sauce.
And in my opinion, traditional style ttaeok-bok-ki is sweet and salty very delicious.
>> In my opinion, the traditional style is sweet and salty which makes it very delicious.
And that\'s why I recommend ttaeok-bok-ki for foreigners.
>>And that\'s why I recommend Tteokbokki to foreigners.
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