I recommend you the awesome area here in south korea for your vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
We have sort of good place for vacation and relaxing
I would like recommend you have jeju traveling and visiting east coast of south korea
there is pretty good sightseeing area for foreigner
the way to get there is little hared to a people who visit there the first time.
but you will be able to get there if you have a effort to find a way.
and some of korean will help you if you ask them to help
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1. We have sort of good place for vacation and relaxing
>>We have sorts of good places for vacation and relaxing.
2. I would like recommend you have jeju traveling and visiting east coast of south korea
>>I would like recommend you to travel and visit Jeju, the east coast of South Korea.
3. there is pretty good sightseeing area for foreigner
>>There is a pretty good sightseeing area for foreigners.
>>There is a pretty good sightseeing area for foreigners.
4. the way to get there is little hared to a people who visit there the first time.
>>The way to get there is little hard for people who will visit there for the first time.
5. but you will be able to get there if you have a effort to find a way.
>>But, you will be able to get there if you effort to find a way.
6. and some of korean will help you if you ask them to help
>>And, some Koreans will help you if you ask them for help.
Very good.
I heard Jeju is really a beautiful place.
- T. Melody ^^
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