I remember
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pine apple kimchi fried rice to made by chef.
when i worked pub restaurant, and it was time for lunch. chef cooked kimchi fried rice. but suddenly chef add the chopped pine apples! and i surprised. but i was very hungry. so i ate once of spoon. and i surprised again! because i had first time to eat that. and it was so good.
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Hi and Happy Monday, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer for the homework question I gave last time.
I didn\'t know that pineapple can be added to a kimchi fried rice. I think, it\'s a very unique idea done by the chef.
Anyway, I hope that you will have a wonderful day and see you later in class! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I remember the pineapple kimchi fried rice made by a chef.
when i worked pub restaurant, and it was time for lunch. chef cooked kimchi fried rice.
when i worked pub restaurant, and it was time for lunch. chef cooked kimchi fried rice.
>> When I worked in a pub restaurant and it was time for lunch, the chef cooked kimchi fried rice.
but suddenly chef add the chopped pine apples! and i surprised.
>> But suddenly, the chef added the chopped pineapples and I was surprised.
but i was very hungry. so i ate once of spoon. and i surprised again! because i had first time to eat that. and it was so good.
>> But I was very hungry so I ate a spoon of it. And I was surprised again because it was my first time to eat it and it was so good!
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