I remember tha day of my soonueng examination.

Good evening [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your story about Suneung.

I think it is really difficult.

I hope that a lot of students will pass.

It is really an important test for their future.

I miss talking to you. I think you are really busy these days.
How are you? I hope that everything is doing great with you.

Thanks for your time. Have a great night.

Teacher Nina

Today is the soonueng examination day.

>> Today is Suneung examination day.
It is the most important day to every high school student.

>> It is the most important for every high school student.
They endured many years for today.

>> They endured many years preparing for this day.
I was the one of students who got the test.

>> I was one of the students who took that kind of test.

>> OR: I was one of the students who prepared for the test.
Remenbering that day, I can still feel the feelings of that day.

>>  Did you mean: Looking back on that day, I can still remember the feeling that I felt that day.

Probably many student use a special D-100 celendar set Soonueng as D-day.

>> Did you mean:  Probably, many students use a special D-100 celendar set Suneung as D-day.
Each morning tearing a page, I ate breakfast with my family and set my mind.

>> Every morning, I ate breakfast with my family and set my mind for the test.
I could focus on my test since my family support me including treating some food, being quiet at night so I could cocentrate to my test.

>> Did you mean: I was able to focus on my test since my family supported me. They treated me some food and they were quiet at night so I could concentrate on my test.

I tend to feel pain on my stomach whenever I eat milk in the morning, so I avoided drinking dairy food for break fast.

>> I tend to feel pain on my stomach whenever I drink milk in the morning, so I avoided drinking/ eating dairy food for breakfast.

and there was a secret note contained many questions which of I chose wrong answer.

>> Did you mean: And there was a secret note which contained many questions which I chose a wrong answer.

Before 7 days left, I started look at the note calmy. maybe, that makes me stay calm even Soonueng day.
>> Did you mean: I only had seven days l left so I started to look at the note that made me calm even during the test.

 Having finished the test, I felt free from the test.

>> Did you mean: When I finished the test, I felt free from it.
It made me study for 6years from my middle school.

>> Did you mean: It made me study hard for six years from middle school.

>> OR: It was the reason I studied hard for six years since I was in middle school.
I really did my best in taking Soonueng.

>> correct

>> OR: I did my best when I took the Suneung.