I remembered
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ate row fish and fish soup with my friends in a fish market at Busan. it\'s so fresh and chewy.
and we saw the hawoondae sea after ate them.
we met 2 years ago when i joined army. so i remembered more them.
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>> I remembered that I ate raw fish and fish soup with my friends in a fish market in Busan.
It\'s so fresh and chewy.
>> CORRECT.
and we saw the hawoondae sea after ate them.
>> And we saw the Hawoondae sea after we ate them.
>> Or: And we saw the Hawoondae sea after eating them.
we met 2 years ago when i joined army. so i remembered more them.
>> We met 2 years ago when I joined the army so I remembered more of them.
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