I respect..

2014-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi. ^^ I came home late so, I was very tired. Also I was very busy. So I am doing my homework. Here is my homework. I respect my husband because sometimes he helps poor people and homeless children. Also he always give old people his favor. However, sometimes, I can't agreed it. I said "I am poor women. I need your help. if you will be a rich man, you can help them. but now, you aren't the rich man." I will give them my favor when I will be a rich person. Maybe I am bad woman. These days, he doesn't to help them because of me. I still respect him because he still wants to help people.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. Don\'t say, \"I am bad woman\" to yourself, okay. I understand your situation. Sometimes, you are stressed because of problems coming in your way. All I can say is that try to loosen up things. Try to stay calm.  Don\'t over stress yourself too much, [이름]. By the way, kindly study the following corrections below, okay. Have a great day ahead. See you! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Hi. ^^I came home late so, I was very tired. >> CorrectAlso I was very busy. >> I was also very busy.So I am doing my homework. >> I did my homework.Here is my homework. >> CorrectI respect my husband because sometimes he helps poor people and homeless children. >> Correct >> OR: I respect my husband because sometimes he helps the needy.Also he always give old people his favor.  >> Also, he always gives old people favors.However, sometimes, I can\'t agreed it.  >> However, sometimes, I can\'t agree with it. >> OR: However, sometimes, I am against of it.I said \"I am poor women. I need your help. if you will be a rich man, you can help them. but now, you aren\'t the rich man.\" >> I said, \" I am a poor woman. I need your help. I you will be a rich man, you can help them. But you are not yet a rich man.\"I will give them my favor when I will be a rich person. >> I will give them a favor when I will be a rich person.Maybe I am bad woman. >> CorrectThese days, he doesn\'t to help them because of me. >> These days, he doesn\'t help them because of me.I still respect him because he still wants to help people. >> But, I still respect him because I know that he still wants to help people.

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