I respect..
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. ^^
I came home late so, I was very tired.
Also I was very busy.
So I am doing my homework.
Here is my homework.
I respect my husband because sometimes he helps poor people and homeless children.
Also he always give old people his favor.
However, sometimes, I can't agreed it.
I said "I am poor women. I need your help. if you will be a rich man, you can help them. but now, you aren't the rich man."
I will give them my favor when I will be a rich person.
Maybe I am bad woman.
These days, he doesn't to help them because of me.
I still respect him because he still wants to help people.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you for making your homework. Don\'t say, \"I am bad woman\" to yourself, okay.
I understand your situation. Sometimes, you are stressed because of problems
coming in your way. All I can say is that try to loosen up things. Try to stay calm.
Don\'t over stress yourself too much, [이름].
By the way, kindly study the following corrections below, okay.
Have a great day ahead.
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
Hi. ^^I came home late so, I was very tired.
>> CorrectAlso I was very busy.
>> I was also very busy.So I am doing my homework.
>> I did my homework.Here is my homework.
>> CorrectI respect my husband because sometimes he helps poor people and homeless children.
>> Correct
>> OR: I respect my husband because sometimes he helps the needy.Also he always give old people his favor.
>> Also, he always gives old people favors.However, sometimes, I can\'t agreed it.
>> However, sometimes, I can\'t agree with it.
>> OR: However, sometimes, I am against of it.I said \"I am poor women. I need your help. if you will be a rich man, you can help them. but now, you aren\'t the rich man.\"
>> I said, \" I am a poor woman. I need your help. I you will be a rich man, you can help them. But you are not yet a rich man.\"I will give them my favor when I will be a rich person.
>> I will give them a favor when I will be a rich person.Maybe I am bad woman.
>> CorrectThese days, he doesn\'t to help them because of me.
>> These days, he doesn\'t help them because of me.I still respect him because he still wants to help people.
>> But, I still respect him because I know that he still wants to help people.
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