I rode the horses.
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to a riding ground. I fed the carrot the horses. They are gentle.
And I rode a horses. The hame of the horse I rode is Belo it\'s white.
I\'m so happy and fun I like it. I want ride the horses one more time.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your first corrected composition for this week, [이름].
I appreciate your sending it.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Write about your activities last week when you didn\'t attend the class or about your school field trip.
I went to a riding ground.
>> OR: I went horseback riding.
I fed the carrot the horses. They are gentle.
>> I fed carrots to the horses. They were gentle.
And I rode a horses.
>> And I rode a horse, too.
The hame of the horse I rode is Belo it\'s white.
>> The name of the horse I rode is Belo, it\'s a white horse.
I\'m so happy and fun I like it.
>> I had so much fun so I\'m happy.
I want ride the horses one more time.
>> I want to ride horses one more time.
>> OR: I want to go horseback riding again.
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