I sand it to Joan

2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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I don't it's right but I try to complete. 1. We will invite Susan--she is the new girl next door to our party. 2. The dog slid on the vinyl--his nails acting like skates and crashed into the trash can. 3. When our stockpile was sold indeed,dumped for surplus--all our sale were 4. Today has been but I will not bore you--with my troubles. 5. Let me tell you about watch--where you are going!

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Hi [이름]^^ Here\'s to your homework correction. Good!^^ T\' Joan   I don\'t it\'s right but I try to complete. >> I don\'t think it is right but I will try to complete.1. We will invite Susan--she is the new girl next door to our party. >>CORRECT!2. The dog slid on the vinyl--his nails acting like skates and crashed into the trash can. >>CORRECT!3. When our stockpile was sold indeed,dumped for surplus--all our sale were >>When our stockpile was sold--indeed, dumped for surplus--all our sales were compromised.4. Today has been but I will not bore you--with my troubles. >>CORRECT!5. Let me tell you about watch--where you are going! >> Let me tell you about--watch where you are going!  

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