I saw a musical.
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Put in have got or has got into the gaps.
Example: Danny __________ a new computer.
Answer: Danny has got a new computer.
1) They _____ a goldfish.
>> They have got a goldfish.
2) Emma _____ lots of friends.
>> Emma has got lots of friends.
3) We _____ a problem.
>> We have got a problem.
4) Joe and Philip _____ a sister.
>> Joe and philip have got a sister.
5) The family _____ two cars.
>> The family has got two cars.
<Essay>
I saw a musical with my girlfriend yesterday at the LG art-center where is located nearby my company.
The musical is about a hero and his lover in the England war with France.
It was the first time I saw a musical. I've very impressed by the acting with [이름] of all of the actors. It was so fantastic and wonderful.
Seeing a musical is expensive, but I'll see it as much as possible by saving my allowance.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Wonderful day to you!
Thank you for the essay. It was good to hear that you seem to be really enjoying your time with your girlfriend. Personal time and time for your loved ones is really important.
Thank you again for today!
-T. Sheele-
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Put in have got or has got into the gaps.Example: Danny __________ a new computer.Answer: Danny has got a new computer.1) They _____ a goldfish. >> They have got a goldfish.
>> Correct! :)2) Emma _____ lots of friends.>> Emma has got lots of friends.
>> Correct! :)3) We _____ a problem. >> We have got a problem.
>> Correct! :)4) Joe and Philip _____ a sister.>> Joe and philip have got a sister. >> Correct! :)5) The family _____ two cars.>> The family has got two cars.>> Correct! :)<Essay>I saw a musical with my girlfriend yesterday at the LG art-center where is located nearby my company.>> Correct! :)
The musical is about a hero and his lover in the England war with France.>> Correct! :)It was the first time I saw a musical.
>> Correct! :)
I\'ve very impressed by the acting with [이름] of all of the actors.
>> I was very impressed by the acting and with the actors\' singing.
It was so fantastic and wonderful.>> Correct! :)Seeing a musical is expensive, but I\'ll see it as much as possible by saving my allowance.
>> Correct! :)
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