I saw movie
학생이 쓴 원문
I saw the animation last night.when I usually had stress. I saw movie until exhausted. and then when I wake up next day.
I feel good. this is similar reason that i like fishing.
some actor in korea said fishing is space out...
# I want to talk next sentence today class .
I don`t like sports using leg like ski and footbool. but I like sports using arm like tennis and ping-pong.
I finally went sking before 10 years. I fell down about 5 times.
I was very sick.
I had went sking about 10 times from 30 years old.
but My skill didn`t improved. I have no talent about sports using leg.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. I\'m actually not a fan of sports. I haven\'t tried doing a lot of sports since I was young. However, I would also like to try winter sports if given the chance.
- T. Beth
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I saw the animation last night.>>> OR: I watch an animation last night.
when I usually had stress. I saw movie until exhausted. and then when I wake up next day. I feel good.
>>> When I am usually stressed out, I see movies until I am exhausted and then when I wake up next day, I feel good.
this is similar reason that i like fishing.
>>> This is the similar reason that I like fishing.
some actor in korea said fishing is space out...
>>> Some actor in Korea said fishing makes them space out.
some actor in korea said fishing is space out...
>>> Some actor in Korea said fishing makes them space out.
# I want to talk next sentence today class .
>>> I want to talk about the sentences I wanted to say in class today.
I don`t like sports using leg like ski and footbool.
>>> I want to talk about the sentences I wanted to say in class today.
I don`t like sports using leg like ski and footbool.
>>> I don`t like sports using my legs like ski and football.
but I like sports using arm like tennis and ping-pong.
>>> But I like sports using the arms like tennis and ping-pong.
I finally went sking before 10 years.
I finally went sking before 10 years.
>>> I have gone skiing 10 years ago.
I fell down about 5 times.
>>> correct
I was very sick.
I was very sick.
>>> I was badly hurt.
I had went sking about 10 times from 30 years old.
I had went sking about 10 times from 30 years old.
>>> I had gone skiing for about 10 times since I was 30 years old.
but My skill didn`t improved.
>>> But my skill didn`t improve.
I have no talent about sports using leg.
>>> I have no talent in sports using legs.
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