I saw the irony, going through a hard time of coronavirus spreading.
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, we live in a tough time when coronavirus is seriously spreading, which keeps us from going to work, school and college, seeing friends and even going out to enjoy ourselves in the sunshine.
And It seems to me that the other weekdays seem like becoming the same day as weekends.
It might look good but the hard part to understand is most people are not welcome to this situation.
Because, as I said, we began being encouraged to forgo all activities we\'ve accustomed to and even started restrict the activities to make a living as well.
I think that there has to be a trade-off between the dream and the reality.
The dream I said means that all people follow the rules to get rid of this coronavirus situation.
The reality means, on the other hand, that not everyone follows them, still worse there are hardly anyone keeping self-quarantine and social distancing.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ki,
Thank you again for the homework!
Have a nice day and talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher ELLY.
I saw the irony, going through a hard time of coronavirus spreading.
>>I saw the irony of going through a hard time from the spreading of the coronavirus.
First of all, we live in a tough time when coronavirus is seriously spreading, which keeps us from going to work, school and college, seeing friends and even going out to enjoy ourselves in the sunshine.
>>First of all, we live in a tough time when the coronavirus is seriously spreading. Because it keeps us from going to work, school or college, seeing friends and even going out to enjoy ourselves in the sunshine.
And It seems to me that the other weekdays seem like becoming the same day as weekends.
Thank you again for the homework!
Have a nice day and talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher ELLY.
I saw the irony, going through a hard time of coronavirus spreading.
>>I saw the irony of going through a hard time from the spreading of the coronavirus.
First of all, we live in a tough time when coronavirus is seriously spreading, which keeps us from going to work, school and college, seeing friends and even going out to enjoy ourselves in the sunshine.
>>First of all, we live in a tough time when the coronavirus is seriously spreading. Because it keeps us from going to work, school or college, seeing friends and even going out to enjoy ourselves in the sunshine.
And It seems to me that the other weekdays seem like becoming the same day as weekends.
>>And it seems to me that some of the weekdays can be just like the weekends.
It might look good but the hard part to understand is most people are not welcome to this situation.
It might look good but the hard part to understand is most people are not welcome to this situation.
>>It might look good, but the hard part to understand is most people do not welcome this situation.
Because, as I said, we began being encouraged to forgo all activities we\'ve accustomed to and even started restrict the activities to make a living as well.
>>Because, as I\'ve said, we are encouraged to forgo all activities we\'ve been accustomed to and we are even restricted from making a living as well.
I think that there has to be a trade-off between the dream and the reality.
Because, as I said, we began being encouraged to forgo all activities we\'ve accustomed to and even started restrict the activities to make a living as well.
>>Because, as I\'ve said, we are encouraged to forgo all activities we\'ve been accustomed to and we are even restricted from making a living as well.
I think that there has to be a trade-off between the dream and the reality.
CORRECT!
or>>In my opinion, there has to be a solution in between the manifestation of the dream into a reality.
The dream I said means that all people follow the rules to get rid of this coronavirus situation.
The dream I said means that all people follow the rules to get rid of this coronavirus situation.
>>The dream I\'ve mentioned just simply means that everyone should follow the rules to get rid of this coronavirus situation.
The reality means, on the other hand, that not everyone follows them, still worse there are hardly anyone keeping self-quarantine and social distancing.
The reality means, on the other hand, that not everyone follows them, still worse there are hardly anyone keeping self-quarantine and social distancing.
>>The reality refers to the fact that not everyone follows them, and what is worse is that there is hardly no one who observes self-quarantine and social distancing.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.