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2010-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I can see your comments in my composition. um,, you told me that you'll call me by Mr.[이름]. but, I couldn't hear anthing since I have talked with you ㅋㅋ <-- this is a common expresssion in the korea. It means smile or laughing. anyway I have a question that If you are asked introducing about you, what do you say first?

강사 첨삭

Hey Mr. [이름] 

Haha! I am sorry. I must have forgotten about that. Haha. But from now on I'll call you 

"Mr. [이름]" the diplomatic officer. Anyway, you can introduce yourself by saying "let me 

start by introducing myself", "apart from being a simple man, I am also..."," to give you 

an idea about who I really am, let me start by...","I am a person who.." and so on.

 There are so many introductions to choose from. 

These are great introductions because it helps you to show the listener 

that you are more than just a human being.

Karla

I can see your comments in my composition.

>>CORRECT

um,, you told me that you'll call me by Mr.[이름].

>>CORRECT

but, I couldn't hear anthing since I have talked with you ㅋㅋ

>>CORRECT

<-- this is a common expresssion in the korea.

>>This is a common expression in Korea.

It means smile or laughing.

>>It means a smile or a laugh.

anyway I have a question that If you are asked introducing about you, what do you say first?

>>Anyway, I have a question, if you are asked to introduce yourself, what do you say first?

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