I smile a lot a day.

2025-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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I smile a lot a day. Because there are many good people behind me. Whenever I go to university, I meet my friends I love. When I talk to them, I always smile at the slightest thing. So, I think I\'m happy, and lucky person.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kara!^^

Did someone tell you that you have a sweet smile?

You look so sweet when you smile.

Andrea

I smile a lot a day. Because there are many good people behind me.

>> I smile a lot in a day because there are many good people behind me.

Whenever I go to university, I meet my friends I love.
>> Whenever I go to the university, I meet my friend whom I love.

When I talk to them, I always smile at the slightest thing.

>> When I talk to them, I always smile at the smallest thing.

So, I think I\'m happy, and lucky person.

>> So, I think I\'m a happy and lucky person.

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