I spend a time on online except for sleeping time
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I spend a time on online except for sleeping time.
10am to 7pm I use e-mail or massanger because I have to work on online
and after working time, I usually do instagram or watching youtube even eating times.
In koea case, can\'t meet more than two people after 6 pm due to covid-19.
It\'s boring to me therfore I can\'t stand it with out internet online world. I think it\'s an addiction.
I think I\'ll spend less time on the online world if I get a little more free to meet people.
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Good morning [이름]!
Most people these days young and old are now well versed with the smartphone technology.
Old people have their own social media, too - hahaha.
Anyway, thanks for sharing. See you later :)
I spend a time on online except for sleeping time.
>>> I spend all my time online except when I sleep.
10am to 7pm I use e-mail or massanger because I have to work on online
and after working time, I usually do instagram or watching youtube even eating times.
>>> I use e-mail or messenger because I have to work online from 10 a.m. to 7 p.m. And after work, I usually watch Instagram or YouTube and eat.
In koea case, can\'t meet more than two people after 6 pm due to covid-19.
>>> In Korea, we can\'t meet more than two people after 6 p.m. due to convid-19.
It\'s boring to me therfore I can\'t stand it with out internet online world.
>>> I can\'t stand it without the Internet because it\'s gonna be boring.
I think it\'s an addiction.
>>> CORRECT!
I think I\'ll spend less time on the online world if I get a little more free to meet people.
>>> If I can meet people more freely, I think I can save time in the online world.
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