I spend just half an hour making myself up before going out

2019-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Do you spend much time making yourself up before going out? I spend just half an hour making myself up before going out ordinarily . 10 minutes for shower, 10 minutes for drying my hair and makeup. 10 minutes for wear the clothes. But I spend an hour when i have a date with my boyfriend. I spend more time every steps especially eyes make-up. I make my eyes bigger. Oh i have a little request. I want just free talk. I had fun to talk about my interested in today.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kate!
There\'s no problem with your request.
I think it would be better for you, too.
You can speak more and we can discuss many topics.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend just half an hour making myself up before going out ordinarily .
>> I usually spend just half an hour making myself up before going out.
10 minutes for shower, 10 minutes for drying my hair and makeup.
>> I spend ten minutes in the shower and 10 minutes for drying my hair and makeup.
10 minutes for wear the clothes.
>> I spend another 10 minutes getting dressed.
But I spend an hour when i have a date with my boyfriend.
>> However, I spend an hour getting ready when I\'m going out with my boyfriend.
I spend more time every steps especially eyes make-up.
>> I need more time for everything especially for my makeup.
I make my eyes bigger.
>> I want to make my eyes look bigger.

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