I spend my weekend doing homework then just relax at home.
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Hello again, Mr. [이름]!~~
Doing your homework regularly is admirable.
Cheers! Jean^^
Weekend is really a great present to me ...
>> The weekend was a great present to me.
In this time, I really take a lot of relax and relief.
>> During this time, I take plenty of rest and do relaxing activities to relieve my stress.
Sometimes, old days than now, I used to utilize that time for my fun.
>> In my younger days, I used to utilize the weekends for fun.
>> OR: When I was younger, I used to have fun on weekends.
But nowadays, I am busy like as there is no time for using.
>> But nowadays, I am too busy living my life that I don\'t have enough time for that kind of fun.
And On Sunday, I always go to the church for my body and soul.
>> On Sundays, I always go to church for my spiritual health.
My mother always say that you have to worship god so as to receive virtue.
>> My mother always say that you have to worship god so as to become virtuous.
Thanks a lot for reading. Bye.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I appreciate your reading my composition. Cheers!
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