I start to tell you about my weekend

2013-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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1. I have three [brothers]. 2. She is [wearing] a new hat. 3. My vacation will [be started] [on] Monday. 4. There are some [birds] in the cage. 5. The book is [covered] with dust because she left [them] in the old barn. 6. I [finished] reading that book last night. 7. His [car] does not seem to be [badly] damaged. 8. Let's go visit [her] and [her] brother. 9. My father [doesn't] like to ski. 10. I usually [eat] lunch [in] noon. Last weekend, as you already knew it, I got up early in the morning. I think it was around 6 o'clock. because my alram was ringing as usual. Don't make false again, I try to awake. So I took a shower with cold water. When cold water touched my skin, My eye was surprised and getting opened. I drove my car to parking lot where fee wasn't charged. I checked my schedule and bought a ticket for my home. Actually It is long way to go home. as far from here, I should stay in the bus a lot. but I chose the alternative.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^
Thank you for always doing your homework.

You almost got a perfect score here!

As for your essay, thank you for sharing about your weekend.

I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

See you!^^

Teacher Nina^^

1. I have three [brothers].

>> Correct!
2. She is [wearing] a new hat.
>> Correct!

3. My vacation will [be started] [on] Monday.
>> My vacation will start on Monday.

4. There are some [birds] in the cage.
>> Correct!

5. The book is [covered] with dust because she left [them] in the old barn.
>> Correct!

6. I [finished] reading that book last night.

>> Correct!
7. His [car] does not seem to be [badly] damaged.
>> Correct!

8. Let\'s go visit [her] and [her] brother.
>> Correct!

9. My father [doesn\'t] like to ski.
>> Correct!

10. I usually [eat] lunch [in] noon.
>> I usually eat lunch at noon.

Last weekend, as you already knew it, I got up early in the morning.
>> Correct!

I think it was around 6 o\'clock. because my alram was ringing as usual.

>> I think it was at around 6 o\'clock because me alarm rang as usual.

** Spelling check [alarm] and please remove the period (.) before the word because.
Don\'t make false again, I try to awake.

>> So that I won\'t be late again, I tried to wake up.

So I took a shower with cold water.
>> Correct

>> OR: So I took a cold shower.

When cold water touched my skin, My eye was surprised and getting opened.
>> When the cold water touched my skin, I was surprised and I shockingly opened my eyes.

I drove my car to parking lot where fee wasn\'t charged.
>> I drove my car to a free parking lot.

I checked my schedule and bought a ticket for my home.
>> I checked my schedule and bought a ticket to home.

Actually It is long way to go home.

>> Correct. OR Actually, it is going to be a long way before I get home.

as far from here, I should stay in the bus a lot. but I chose the alternative.

>> Since I was already there, I should stay on the bus for a long time but I chose another alternative.

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