I start with apologize for today's absence

2013-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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brush / breakfast / his / he / after / teeth >> He brushes his teeth after breakfast. 1. mechanic fixs a car 2. the baby cries at the night 3. the sun rises in the east 4. she eat breakfast for carrots 5. she always worry about her children 6. not many people retire before they are sixty 7. the students speak English in the classroom 8. a lawyer defend people in trouble 9. Mary enjoys to listen classical music 10.batteries change chemical energy into electrical. what is difference between electrical , elecronical?? I did'n answer your call teacher. because I was in the boss' room. He was approving my document which is important to us. It contains about some event schedule for tomorrow. So he just want to see that right away. you know many bosses get anger, they change to devil . sorry for absent today byebye~

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^^

Yeah, I understand! Don\'t worry!^^

Well anyway, I have some corrections for you below, kindly check them okay?^^;

See you!

~t. Nina~

brush / breakfast / his / he / after / teeth
>> He brushes his teeth after breakfast.
1. mechanic fixs a car

>>A mechanic fixes cars.
2. the baby cries at the night

>>Correct!
3. the sun rises in the east

>>Correct!
4. she eat breakfast for carrots

>>She eats carrots for breakfast.
5. she always worry about her children

>>She always worries about her children.
6. not many people retire before they are sixty

>>Correct!
7. the students speak English in the classroom

>>Correct!
8. a lawyer defend people in trouble

>>A lawyer defends people in trouble.
9. Mary enjoys to listen classical music

>>Mary enjoys listening to classical music.
10.batteries change chemical energy into electrical.

>>Batteries change chemical energy into electrical energy
what is difference between electrical , elecronical??
>>What\'s the difference between electrical and electronic?
I did\'n answer your call teacher. because I was in the boss\' room.
>>I wasn\'t able to answer your call teacher because I was inside the office of my boss.

He was approving my document which is important to us.

>>Correct!
It contains about some event schedule for tomorrow.

>>Correct!
So he just want to see that right away.

>>So he wanted to check that right away.
you know many bosses get anger, they change to devil .

>>You know when my boss gets angry, she/he becomes a devil.
sorry for absent today byebye~

>>Sorry for being absent today, bye!^^

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