I start with apologize for today's absence
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^^
Yeah, I understand! Don\'t worry!^^
Well anyway, I have some corrections for you below, kindly check them okay?^^;
See you!
~t. Nina~
brush / breakfast / his / he / after / teeth
>> He brushes his teeth after breakfast.
1. mechanic fixs a car
>>A mechanic fixes cars.
2. the baby cries at the night
>>Correct!
3. the sun rises in the east
>>Correct!
4. she eat breakfast for carrots
>>She eats carrots for breakfast.
5. she always worry about her children
>>She always worries about her children.
6. not many people retire before they are sixty
>>Correct!
7. the students speak English in the classroom
>>Correct!
8. a lawyer defend people in trouble
>>A lawyer defends people in trouble.
9. Mary enjoys to listen classical music
>>Mary enjoys listening to classical music.
10.batteries change chemical energy into electrical.
>>Batteries change chemical energy into electrical energy
what is difference between electrical , elecronical??
>>What\'s the difference between electrical and electronic?
I did\'n answer your call teacher. because I was in the boss\' room.
>>I wasn\'t able to answer your call teacher because I was inside the office of my boss.
He was approving my document which is important to us.
>>Correct!
It contains about some event schedule for tomorrow.
>>Correct!
So he just want to see that right away.
>>So he wanted to check that right away.
you know many bosses get anger, they change to devil .
>>You know when my boss gets angry, she/he becomes a devil.
sorry for absent today byebye~
>>Sorry for being absent today, bye!^^
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