I still believe traditional medicine

2022-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I still believe traditional medicine. Because when I was very young, my skin suffered from atopy. But I used traditional lotion, it\'s get better.

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I still believe traditional medicine.

>> I still believe in traditional medicine.

Because when I was very young, my skin suffered from atopy.

>> It is because when I was very young, my skin suffered from \"Atopy\".

But I used traditional lotion, it\'s get better.

>> I used traditional lotion and then it got better.

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