I take after in everything my parents generally.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
There are many ways for us to follow.
>> There are many paths for us to follow.
For the better future we learn more from teacher.
>> For a better future, we need to learn more from our teacher.
You are the best teacher who guides me the right way.
>> correct
These days are very hot and humid.
>> correct
Be careful your health and take care of yourself.
>> Be careful of your health and take care of yourself.
I am really stuffed with hot weather nowadays.
>> I feel suffocated with the hot weather nowadays.
I will by good chance work at factory which I was in 1 years ago.
>> I might get a chance to work at the factory which I was in a year ago.
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