I take after in everything my parents generally.

2018-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

There are many ways for us to follow. For the better future we learn more from teacher. You are the best teacher who guides me the right way. These days are very hot and humid. Be careful your health and take care of yourself. I am really stuffed with hot weather nowadays. I will by good chance work at factory which I was in 1 years ago. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean


There are many ways for us to follow.

>> There are many paths for us to follow.


 For the better future we learn more from teacher.

>> For a better future, we need to learn more from our teacher.


 You are the best teacher who guides me the right way.

>> correct


 These days are very hot and humid.

>> correct


 Be careful your health and take care of yourself.

>> Be careful of your health and take care of yourself.


 I am really stuffed with hot weather nowadays.

>> I feel suffocated with the hot weather nowadays.


 I will by good chance work at factory which I was in 1 years ago.

>> I might get a chance to work at the factory which I was in a year ago.

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