I talk about a topic that the other person is interested in
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework: I\\\'m not good at small talk. And I\\\'m not good at speaking in a fun or witty manner. Some people I know have a great sense of humor. Sometimes I feel envious them. But I have other ways of maintaining good relationships with other people. When I first mention a topic, I talk about a topic that the other person is interested in or may find interesting. Then the other person will say a lot of fun, and if I listen to them and respond positively, I have an experience that will be a pleasant time. After the conversation, we have a good relationship.
Prayer: God, help me to do my job well today. Give me the wisdom to work with passion within me, but to be considerate of others and achieve good cooperation. I believe that you will help me and be with me. I pray in the name of Jesus. amen.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Elliot. Thank you for always checking out the homework bit and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the topic. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I\'ll talk to you soon. ~Jane ^_^
Homework:
I\\\'m not good at small talk. And I\\\'m not good at speaking in a fun or witty manner.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> I\'m not good at small talk and I\'m not good at speaking in a fun or witty manner.
Some people I know have a great sense of humor.
>> CORRECT =)
Sometimes I feel envious them.
>> Sometimes I feel envious of them.
But I have other ways of maintaining good relationships with other people.
>> CORRECT =)
When I first mention a topic, I talk about a topic that the other person is interested in or may find interesting.
>> CORRECT =)
Then the other person will say a lot of fun, and if I listen to them and respond positively, I have an experience that will be a pleasant time.
>> Then the other person will say a lot of fun things and if I listen to them and respond positively, I have an experience that will be a pleasant time.
After the conversation, we have a good relationship.
>> CORRECT =)
Prayer:
God, help me to do my job well today.
>> CORRECT =)
Give me the wisdom to work with passion within me, but to be considerate of others and achieve good cooperation.
>> CORRECT =)
I believe that you will help me and be with me.
>> CORRECT =)
I pray in the name of Jesus. amen.
>> CORRECT =)
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