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Hello there,
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I do know that you have a big chance of improving your skills in English.
I do appreciate your effort in writing an essay because this could really enhance your skill.
T. Nina^^
I went to 1)_the airport at 6:00 AM yesterday.I had to catch
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2)_a flight to Paris.
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The lines at 3)_the airport were very long, so I had to wait
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4)a long time.Once
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5)_the plane took off, I tried to get some sleep but I couldn\'t.
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Then I ate 6)a pretty good meal,
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7)a rare occurrence on airplanes! Later, I spoke to one of
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8)__the__ flight attendants for
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9)a_ while. She was pretty. She told me that
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10)_the_ pilot of
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11)_the airplane was French. I managed to fall asleep for about
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12)an_ hour. After I woke up, I felt refreshed. I ordered
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13)__a__ drink, then another. Generally, it was
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14)a_ pretty smooth flight.
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>>I was resting then on my couch last night.
Suddenly my phone rang.
>>Suddenly, my phone rang.
I answered my call which was called by my friend.
>>My friend called me.
>>I answered my friend\'s call.
When I was in high school, I met them there.
>>I met him when I was in high school and I went out to see him.
We talked about my past days and enjoyed our time.
>>We enjoyed talking about our past experiences.
l came back my home at 01:30 A.M
>>I went back home at 1:30 A.M.^^
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