I tend to find someone whom I can talk my things

2014-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I have a worry, especially in working, I often stay in calm. But I know the fact that an Worry gathers another worry, So all I have to do is just let it go or forget about it. These are very hard to do. The easier way to manage my problem is to talk someone about my status. So I tend to find someone or friend who can understand my situation and talk to them about my problem. My friends talk to me with sympathy and they agree with my opinion. Seniors tell me about their experiences and the way to find the solution to get over it. Even though they don't give me a right answer about my problem, just talking with friends or coworkers can give me a significant courage or will to overcome the bad situation.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

You are right! Just by merely talking to your friends is really relaxing.

We can vent out our feelings to them.^^ How often do you go out with your friends?

Do you still meet your best friend? What do you usually do with them?

You can tell it in class.^^ See you tomorrow!

Teacher Nina

 

When I have a worry, especially in working, I often stay in calm.

>> When I have worries, especially at work I often stay calm.
But I know the fact that an Worry gathers another worry, So all I have to do is just let it go or forget about it.

>> But I know the fact that a worry gathers another one. So all I have to do is just to let it go or forget about it.

These are very hard to do.

>> These are very hard things to do.
The easier way to manage my problem is to talk someone about my status.

>> The easier way to manage my problem is to talk to someone about my status.
So I tend to find someone or friend who can understand my situation and talk to them about my problem.

>> Correct!
My friends talk to me with sympathy and they agree with my opinion.

>> Correct!
Seniors tell me about their experiences and the way to find the solution to get over it.

>> Seniors tell me about their experiences and they look for a way to find a solution to get over it.

Even though they don\'t give me a right answer about my problem, just talking with friends or coworkers can give me a significant courage or will to overcome the bad situation.

>> Even though they don\'t give me a right answer about my problem, just by talking with friends or co-workers they can give me the courage or will to overcome the bad situation.

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