I tend to find someone whom I can talk my things
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Hello [이름]!
You are right! Just by merely talking to your friends is really relaxing.
We can vent out our feelings to them.^^ How often do you go out with your friends?
Do you still meet your best friend? What do you usually do with them?
You can tell it in class.^^ See you tomorrow!
Teacher Nina
When I have a worry, especially in working, I often stay in calm.
>> When I have worries, especially at work I often stay calm.
But I know the fact that an Worry gathers another worry, So all I have to do is just let it go or forget about it.
>> But I know the fact that a worry gathers another one. So all I have to do is just to let it go or forget about it.
These are very hard to do.
>> These are very hard things to do.
The easier way to manage my problem is to talk someone about my status.
>> The easier way to manage my problem is to talk to someone about my status.
So I tend to find someone or friend who can understand my situation and talk to them about my problem.
>> Correct!
My friends talk to me with sympathy and they agree with my opinion.
>> Correct!
Seniors tell me about their experiences and the way to find the solution to get over it.
>> Seniors tell me about their experiences and they look for a way to find a solution to get over it.
Even though they don\'t give me a right answer about my problem, just talking with friends or coworkers can give me a significant courage or will to overcome the bad situation.
>> Even though they don\'t give me a right answer about my problem, just by talking with friends or co-workers they can give me the courage or will to overcome the bad situation.
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