I thank you for your kindness.

2009-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Shy Now, I have reviewed today class I thank you for your kindness. Because today is first time to me, I think I was awful, terrible student I am shy I am original shy ^^ First of all, I have bad hearing ability I want for you to speak aloud clearly I will expect tomorrow class with you Good night~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! It's so nice to see your composition on this board... I hope you can do this more often... You are not a terrible student, you are actually great... Just tell me what you need to know and your requests for the class and I'll be more than happy to meet all your requests... I'll see you later!!   xoxoxo, T. Shy ^_^     Here are the corrections on your composition:   Now, I have reviewed today class>> I have reviewed today's class >> A while ago, I have reviewed today's class I thank you for your kindness.>> CORRECT Because today is first time to me,>>Because today is my first time. I think I was awful, terrible student >> I think I was an awful and terrible student. I am shy >> CORRECT I am original shy ^^>> I am usually shy ^^ First of all, I have bad hearing ability>> First of all, I have a bad hearing abilityI want for you to speak aloud clearly>> I want you to speak aloud clearly I will expect tomorrow class with you>> I will expect tomorrow's class with you

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