I think

2023-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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I think car is the most dangerous transportation. Car accidents happen often. I have never experienced a car accident. But,many people experience car accident. In korea, there is a famous youtube channel \"Hanmuncheol TV\". That is channel about car accident. Sometime, I see his videos about car accident. That\'s terrible. I hope car acccident doesn\'t happen.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] U!
Thank you for always doing your homework, I appreciate you efforts! 
Anyway, see you later!
-T.Jhozel 

I think car is the most dangerous transportation. 
>> Correct.
>> OR: 
Cars, in my opinion, are the most dangerous mode of transportation.
Car accidents happen often. I have never experienced a car accident. 
>> Cars are, in my opinion, the most dangerous mode of transportation. Car accidents happen frequently.
But,many people experience car accident. 
>> However, car accidents happen to a lot of people.
In korea, there is a famous youtube channel \"Hanmuncheol TV\". 
>> There is a popular YouTube channel in Korea called \"Hanmuncheol TV,\" which is about a car accident.
That is channel about car accident. 
>> Correct.
Sometime, I see his videos about car accident. 
>> I occasionally watch his videos about car accidents.
That\'s terrible. I hope car acccident doesn\'t happen.
>>  That\'s terrible. I hope there is no car accident.

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